My beautiful love,
I love you so…
My beautiful love,
when you say,
“Don’t leave me.”
I love you so…
My beautiful love,
when you say,
“Don’t leave me,
I comin’ with you!”
I love you so…
My beautiful love,
you leave me now!
When you say,
“I’ll miss you”,
I love you so…
My beautiful love,
“Will you…
come back to me?
I love you so…”
My beautiful love,
I love you so…
Dear Simala Baji
Your words are simple, yet they echo with deep emotion and sincerity. There’s a beautiful rhythm to the repetition that mirrors the ache and hope of love — holding on, letting go, and longing. The innocence in the lines, like *”I comin’ with you!”*, adds a heartfelt charm. It feels raw and real — like someone pouring out love without filters. Truly touching and soulful.
Assalamualykum Nabeela,
Thank you for your kind words.
When Jaafer was little and I had to go out, he’d yell, “Don’t leave me, I comin’ with you.”
I used to sing these lines back to him and it became Jaafer’s song.
Was able to add some more lines to Jaafer’s song this past Wednesday, May 28, 2025.
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